r/KeepWriting • • 39m ago

How do you feel when you love someone who does not love you back?

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My eyes were all on her when I saw her with someone, with whiskey in my hand, and just one thought, "How can she do this to me"? She would never understand how it feels about how much I love her with all my heart, and she doesn’t love me.

It’s been 6 months since I first saw her, in a nearby jazz cafe, alone, with no one around. She was just majestic. Every night from then on I went to that cafe just to get a glimpse of her. I must say she had a bit of an attitude. Well, it is justified when you are the epitome of beauty. One day, as I was walking down the road to my apartment, I felt someone was following me. When I looked back, it was her. I didn’t want to get my hopes high. So I just looked ahead and walked sincerely as if I didn't know. She followed me to my apartment. She entered my room, took a look around, and sat on my sofa. I didn’t say a word. I broke the silence by answering my phone. She got up and headed back to her place, the cafe. It was weird.

The next day when I visited the cafe, my eyes were searching for her. As I ordered a drink, my eyes went to the corner of the cafe, where all the rich ones sit. And then I saw her sitting on the lap of an old man, in his 70s, he wore a diamond bracelet and a gold tooth, which always shined when he laughed. She was happy with him I guess, because I saw her purring with her whole heart when the old man rubbed her neck. I drank my whisky half heartedly and thought to myself that “What can I do ? That’s how CATS are”


r/KeepWriting • • 4h ago

Poem of the day: No Trespassing Signs

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r/KeepWriting • • 21m ago

[Feedback] Insufferable

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I pretended to fall asleep everywhere. It was my cute little quirk. And I brought my book everywhere I went. I did love to read, but there was really no need for me to do it at a restaurant. He played guitar. His hair was messy, but in a styled way. And I knew when he was nearby because I could smell his cologne. And I honestly loved it. I was too cool for things other people liked. And so was he. I woke up early, too early. I was quirky and different. He knew all the lyrics to songs nobody else knew. I knew them too.

"Don't go breaking my heart," he said. "I won't," I said. And kicked myself for weeks for not saying, "I couldn't if I tried." Although I was sure I couldn't. He somehow made this beautiful connection with everyone he met. Everyone felt they were special to him. But I was sure I wasn't.

I couldn't help but gaze into his eyes. It felt like he was pouring his soul into mine. It felt like magic. Once, we sat on the shore staring at the water and sang a song together. One only we were cool enough to know the lyrics to. I didn't say a word. We just locked eyes and smiled at each other. My heart leaped and lurched. I look back with wonder. We were insufferable.


r/KeepWriting • • 21h ago

I finally reached 100,000 words on my sequel first draft!

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I’ve been posting big word count milestones (80,000…90,000) and recently I reached 100,000 words🤯 at this point the story has become much clearer to me and I’ve got a skeleton to work with. I try to write 2,000 words every day in the drafting process.

I went back to the beginning of the book and wrote about my main character Captain Louis Wolffe leading his squad of soldiers (all humans except for a lanky, towering metal alien) to provide security detail for a popular night market on their homeworld Tertullia. The plot is set 1,000 years in the future so they arrive via dropship. I’m growing the world’s unique culture to expand the lore.


r/KeepWriting • • 3h ago

Writing Question: What is a moment in your life that feels like it was yesterday?

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Hey guys, I am asking this question to write about it for my English class, so feel free to be as detailed as possible, also DM for any questions. Be creative with it, add dialogue and whatever you wish! I greatly appreciate it!!!


r/KeepWriting • • 4h ago

Continuation

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Continuation, a flash-fiction piece of about identity, routine, and the terrible cost of continuity. What if the most terrifying prison wasn't a place, but a life that never truly changes?


r/KeepWriting • • 4h ago

Poem of the day: No Trespassing Signs

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r/KeepWriting • • 11h ago

[Discussion] does anyone else struggle with making dialogue sound natural or is it just me

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i feel like whenever i write conversations between characters it ends up reading like they're reciting a script instead of actually talking to each other. like no one in real life says things that perfectly or explains things that clearly. how do you all get past this? do you read it out loud or have any tricks that actually work?


r/KeepWriting • • 6h ago

Writing to one word a month, a year later

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In late 2025 I decided to add "write fiction in English" to my list of New Year's resolutions (Spanish is my native language). I figured doing it with friends would be more fun (plus it'd make me more accountable), so I invited some people to join, and they invited others, and in January we were running a small writing club via WhatsApp, which we called Unsolicited Musings.

We write to a monthly prompt. Everyone shares their texts before the end of the month and I put together PDF and ePub files for internal distribution, with illustrated covers and all. It's almost the end of October, and we have collectively produced 100+ texts and over 100,000 words.

Some silly learnings we found along the way:

  1. Progress over perfection. Sticking to a monthly cadence pushed everyone to finish monthly pieces instead of spending the whole year polishing a single one. Of course they're not all great—most of them are part of the exercise—but completing work provides a sense of achievement that feeds the drive to write more.
  2. A prompt is worth a thousand words. Having a starting point is incredibly helpful: not everyone wrote to it, but for those of us who fear the blank page, having something to kick us off was super valuable.
  3. Sharing is caring. A bunch of the people in the WhatsApp group are strangers to one another (even to me, and I'm the one running it!), but the act of sharing their work with each other proved immensely powerful. It lowers the feeling of vulnerability, making it less daunting to write and helping overcome that annoying and always-present "oh, I can't really write" feeling.

We're turning this private group into a public platform, if anyone's keen to join and give it a shot. One word a month, everyone writes to it, everyone reads everyone. Free to apply from anywhere at www.unsolicitedmusings.org (new members start on 1 Dec) 😄


r/KeepWriting • • 8h ago

[Feedback] How is the hook?

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Hi, wondering about first chapter hook! Thanks.

28 August 2025
"If anyone finds this, do not burn it."
That was the first sentence in the notebook and Daniel’s name came next. Three pages later, Daniel was dead, and everything after that belonged to Arden.
There was blood on the kitchen floor. It had started as a thin line running through the cracks between the tiles, dark and sluggish. Now it crept beneath the table, around the legs of an overturned chair, and reached the corner of the rug his mother had always hated but could never bring herself to throw away. Arden lay beside the table with one hand pressed against his bleeding side; the other was locked around the notebook. His fingers had gone numb minutes ago, but his grip had not loosened one bit. Outside, sirens wailed somewhere beyond the estate, rising and falling, close enough to hear but distant enough to be meant for someone else. Inside the wall, something clicked.
Click.
Click.
Click.
Arden kept his eyes on the kitchen door. Since the countdown expired and the Admittance file appeared on everyone’s phones, every second felt stolen and every hour refused to end. Beyond the kitchen, rain poured through the jagged remains of the living-room window. The metallic smell of blood hung beneath the chemical smoke, sharpened by burning insulation from somewhere behind the plaster. A damaged circuit clicked and spat sparks inside the wall. Above the counter, cupboards were open on twisted hinges and pieces of a shattered mug lay near the sink.
Arden bit his lip to stifle the shaking.
Blood had reached the bottom corner of the notebook and soaked into the cardboard, softening it beneath his fingers. Under his trembling thumb, the ink of Daniel’s handwriting began to bleed. The spreading smudge bothered Arden more than the pain burning through his side.
Daniel's handwriting was infuriatingly neat, every page looked measured rather than written. Arden's first page was a mess with notes that crowded one another, names boxed, circled, and crossed out. Some dates had been written with enough force to tear through the paper with arrows that ended nowhere. Weird terminology sat beside newspaper clippings and questions that still had no answers. Yet right in the center of the chaos, untouched by his frantic revisions, was Daniel's last complete sentence:
The Offering rewards continuity, not truth.
Slow, deliberate footsteps echoed in the hall, and Arden went still. He didn't move much to begin with but pain flared beneath his ribs, and he swallowed a groan. Whoever was approaching already knew where to find him. The footsteps stopped outside the kitchen.
“Arden?” Dr. Varga’s calm voice echoed through the house. She sounded calm; She had a way of making composure feel like an accusation. The handle turned, and the door swung inward. Dr. Varga stopped in the doorway, one hand still gripping the brass handle.
Outside the careful setting of her therapy room, she looked like someone who could disappear into a supermarket queue. Rain had darkened the shoulders of her coat, and a strand of wet hair clung to her cheek. Without the soft lamps and the careful order of her office, she looked small. Her gaze moved from the blood on the tiles to the notebook against his chest. “Arden” she repeated.
Arden tried to laugh, but the breath caught and pain flared through his side. “You brought them here.”
“I called them because I was worried about you.”
He studied her face. She was good at this, infuriatingly so. She looked sad, as though this were simply the crisis she had spent months warning him about. “That notebook has become... some kind of fixation object,” she said.
“If Daniel had been your brother, you wouldn’t call it a fixation” Arden said through his teeth.
“Please listen to me.”
“You always say that right before you explain why I’m wrong.”
Dr. Varga lips thinned. Then the therapist’s expression settled back into place: patient, professional, warm in carefully measured amounts. The kind of person who could sit across from you and make surrender sound like self-care. “Let me help you,” she said.
“If you wanted to help me, you would have listened.” His voice scraped on the last word. “You wouldn’t have taken everything I told you and used it against me.”
Dr. Varga drew a slow breath, the kind she expected him to follow. “Arden... Let’s slow this down. You’re hurt. You’re frightened. Your Counterweight is reinforcing around the notebook, and it’s making everything feel more urgent than it is.” Her voice settled into a rhythm his body recognised before his mind did. Instantly, the white heat in Arden’s side began to cool. The sharp stink of smoke softened, fading into the background as an artificial calm forced its way into his chest. His lungs expanded, mechanically trying to match the steady pace of her breathing. For half a second, his fingers loosened. He wanted to believe her. He wanted to let go.
Then his Counterweight brought him back to the present like he has just been saved from drowning. The fixation dragged him back to the notebook, and the false calm fractured with a sudden pain into his side. The smoke caught in his throat, and his fingers locked harder around the cover. His next breath came ragged, but it was his own. “I can't believe you’re using your ability on me right now.”
Dr. Varga went entirely still and the sudden break in her rhythm was answer enough for Arden. “Jesus. I should’ve known better.”
“This is de-escalation,” she said, her voice dropping into a professional, level register.
“It’s Reframe. You tipped Ward off-” Arden continued, his voice flat. He dug his heels into the floor, forcing his back to slide up against the oven door. The metal creaked under his weight as he dragged himself an inch higher. “-Daniel wrote about this before anyone knew what the Offering was.”
“Daniel wrote three pages of confused notes after overhearing something he didn't understan-”
“You don't believe that,”
“Look just listen to me, Mayor Ward has nothing to do with this,” she said.
“You hesitated a moment ago. Do you really believe Daniel wasn't onto something?”
“You're bleeding onto your kitchen floor, Arden.”
“Answer the damn question.” Arden almost shouted.
“I'm trying to keep you alive.”
“No.” He shook his head. “You're trying to stop me from asking.”
Silence settled between them, leaving only the ominous clicking from the walls and the constant hiss of the rain. Dr. Varga shifted her weight from one leg to the other, then took a cautious step forward, her shoe crunching on a shard of glass.
“Stay there,” Arden snarled, bracing his good hand against the floor. He tried to lock his knees to push himself up, but his vision swam with white spots and his ribs locked in a tight, burning knot. He slumped back against the oven, teeth gritted. “Don’t come any closer or else things won't end nicely for you,”
Dr. Varga stopped. “Look, it doesn’t matter what I think. I know what this obsession has done to you.”
“What it did to me?” He looked her in the eyes and repeated again,"What it did to me?" The irony of the situation he was in made Arden chuckle in a distasteful way.
Neither of them moved. Outside, another siren could be heard through the shattered living-room window. Dr. Varga’s gaze drifted back down to his chest “That notebook is not evidence, you know, ” Her expression softened into the familiar concern he had come to distrust. “It is just keeping you trapped inside the wound and your Counterweight is making this worse than it actually is -”
Blood had seeped between his fingers and into the notebook’s cracked spine. His forearm trembled with the effort of holding it, yet his grip continued to tighten. Any exhausted hand should have opened by now, but his did not. Deep under the shaking, something locked. Dr. Varga held out an open palm. “Let go of the notebook, Arden. We don’t have to do this the hard way.”
Arden tried. He genuinely tried to let the notebook go, and that was the most exhausting part.For one agonizing second, his mind commanded his fingers to relax, and he felt his knuckles twitch. The notebook should have slipped free onto the wet tiles, but his hand stayed stubbornly closed. “I’d love to,” he whispered and then he looked up, meeting her eyes. “I can’t.”
Her expression softened with a pity Arden could not bear to look at. “Then you need to understand that what happens next is for your safety.”
Arden lowered his gaze to the notebook, his thumb moved across the opening page, leaving a smear of blood over the first line. The warning remained legible beneath it:
If anyone finds this, do not burn it.
Seven years had passed since Daniel’s motorcycle went over the edge. For five of them, Arden had accepted the word accidentbecause he had been given no reason not to. Then, two years ago, he found the notebook and learned what Daniel had overheard in Ward’s office. After that, accidentbecame impossible to believe. Arden’s own account began beneath Daniel’s notes, his hurried script marking the day the questions had started:
15 September 2023: the day there was no cause for concern.
"Arden - " Varga’s voice sounded distant now, muffled as if she were speaking through a wall of water. Arden lowered his eyes, letting the edges of the kitchen fade away until there was nothing left but the white paper and the ink. Anyone who found the notebook needed to understand one thing first: this was not a confession, and it wasn't history either. History was just what powerful people called a lie after enough witnesses were dead.
The notebook had belonged to Daniel first. Then it became Arden’s. His account began on a Friday morning in September, when the world still knew how to pretend it was normal.


r/KeepWriting • • 9h ago

The Red Queens Race

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The wind over the rolling coastal hills carried the sweet, sharp scent of hazelnuts, figs and salt, sweeping past quiet gardens along the slope. On a wooden porch overlooking the mist, two figures sat in the quiet dusk, a traveler, who had spent years observing the silent machinery of the world, and his companion.

Between them lay the remnants of an evening meal: fresh grey mullet sourced from the docks, vegetables picked straight from the garden, and a bowl of hearty soup that warmed the cool autumn air. Resting under the table, a small terrier stirred in his sleep, guarding his favorite pillow with an unspoken, instinctual vigilance.
“Look at him,” the traveler said, nodding toward the dog. “Even in his sleep, he’s running code he didn't write. Protecting resources he didn't choose to care about.”

His companion smiled, wrapping her hands around her warm mug. “And what about us?”
“We spent three billion years doing the exact same thing,” he said softly, leaning back.
He looked out toward the dark horizon, where the sea merged with the sky, thinking of the grand, silent script that had built them.

He thought of the ancient molecular systems from which life emerged, mindless, self replicating strands of code. He thought of their single-celled ancestors, locked in endless microscopic wars for millennia. An endless evolutionary arms race, until two of them ceased fighting, merged, and created the mitochondria, delegating energy production to invent complex life. He thought of the endless trade-offs written into the fabric of life, hardwired into our biology: the tiny mouse, living fast and dying young, putting every drop of energy into immediate reproduction because the harsh realities of the unforgiving wild meant tomorrow was never guaranteed.

Every creature was a vehicle. A vessel constructed by microscopic strands of code, selfish, blind, and relentless, seeking only to pass the baton forward through time. To outrun the pathogens mutating at its heels, life had invented sexual reproduction, shuffling the genetic deck every generation just to keep the locks one step ahead of the keys. It was the eternal Red Queen’s race: running as fast as possible just to stay in the exact same place.

“It sounds exhausting,” she said quietly, watching the sea. “3 billion years of running, on a treadmill that never stops.”
“It is,” he agreed. “Only If you let the code dictate the game. The mouse runs because it has to. The corporate world builds bigger treadmills because everyone agrees to measure value by speed, scale, and accumulation. If everyone around you is running faster, standing still feels like falling behind.”
“So how do you stop?”
The traveler took a slow breath, feeling the cool air fill his lungs, the warmth of the tea in his hand, and the solid weight of the porch beneath his feet.

“You realize that you are the first vehicle in the history of the world that can look at its own programming and choose to refuse it,” he said. “You don't need to keep running to outrun the paradox. You don't need to win a game you never asked to join. You step off the track. You change the rules.”

He looked at her, at the quiet life they had built, away from the noise, away from the rat race, surrounded by growing plants, lush green hills, good food, and shared memories.

“You decide that winning isn't about how many genetic copies you leave behind, it’s not about how much wealth and resources you’ve accumulated, how many people you’ve impressed and how far you run on someone else’s board,” he said, a faint smile touching his lips. “Perhaps winning isn't a race at all. Perhaps it’s sitting right here, under the tree, watching the madness pass by, holding the person you love, and realizing that you don’t have to run another step.”


r/KeepWriting • • 9h ago

[Feedback] Writing a story and got traumatized

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Hey guys so I was writing a story, this started at the request of my ex, she told me to write an obsessive story about love,dark romance and thriller blend , btw I am more a of a crime and psychological thriller. So I started writing and it brought out the darkness in me as the ink on paper. We had our break up, even break up she was afraid that i would do something to her like I had written in the story, but that's something for another time, I am going to make it into a novel. Publish it maybe. I started again yesterday after a long break, but the thing is I need feedbacks, without sensible reviews from good readers the story loses the deeper insights, so if anyone upto a good read let me know, the title is btw " A SHADOW IN BLOOD"


r/KeepWriting • • 10h ago

The Grandmaster Files Pt 94

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The void began filling with bright green, fuzzy water. The tennis court under Ohio is draining right onto the chessboard. Thousands of fluorescent yellow balls are bobbing around us like citrus.


r/KeepWriting • • 11h ago

[Discussion] When You Make a Cover to the Story You'll Likely Never Write

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I've had a premise in my head for a while, but it never grew any legs. I do have other projects to finish first, so please enjoy my roughly-cobbled-together cover that will likely never see print. :)


r/KeepWriting • • 12h ago

Hello Readers!

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Embrace yourselves, MrAnonymous Enters Medium.

Choosing between informative, commendatory, defamatory, critique writings, nothing shows up in my mind to write today.

I believe Writing is an Art!Embrace yourselves, MrAnonymous Enters Medium.Choosing between informative, commendatory, defamatory, critique writings, nothing shows up in my mind to write today.I believe Writing is an Art!

A true writing isn't done to garner attention, alter peoples minds or instill knowledge in someone. The purpose of a writing is self justified by the experiences, insights and perspectives behind the person writing it. And a good writer has always read more than he ever wrote.

Reading & Writing. What do you think? Reading text and writing text and that’s all? No, it isn’t. Reading is the one characteristic of humans that enables us to obtain knowledge from different sources, views and perspectives. Most of our reading is not done solely from books, its done in our day to day life. And similarly writing is the other characteristic of humans that enables us to apply whatever we have read so far.

Except the fact that writing also enables ourselves to be dissolved and reflected in it even without our knowledge.

Check the original post at Medium:
https://medium.com/@mranonymous-777/hello-readers-c0729afa1755?sharedUserId=mranonymous-777


r/KeepWriting • • 12h ago

First chapter of non fiction book.

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r/KeepWriting • • 1d ago

Do you believe in word counts

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r/KeepWriting • • 12h ago

[URGENT!!] Need Critiques for my new Story , be as direct as possible 🙏🏻

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r/KeepWriting • • 18h ago

[Feedback] Book Opening — Feedback?

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r/KeepWriting • • 18h ago

An Evening Around a Bus Stop

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I was walking home after my gym session when I saw two contrasting scenes of life within a few steps of each other. At the bus stop sat an old man, frail and exhausted, maybe even sick. Beside him rested a packet of chips and a bottle of soft drink. He stared blankly at the road ahead, his face seeming even more tired than his body. That packet of chips and soda bottle told a quiet story of survival.

Just a few meters ahead on the pavement sat a couple around the same age. They were sharing food out of a lunchbox they had likely packed before starting their day. They looked tired too, yet they looked at each other while they ate, noticeably content. That prepared lunchbox told a different story - they were prepared to live through the day.

Perhaps the old man had fought battles no one could see and perhaps the couple had survived theirs too. Our backgrounds, our histories and the cards we are dealt write most of our defaults for us. If we don’t question or break the status quo, our responses become automatic and survival becomes a habit we forget to question.

Walking away from the bus stop, I just felt an urge to pay closer attention to my own routine. At what point do we stop actively participating in our days and start just watching the traffic go by?

 


r/KeepWriting • • 18h ago

[UPDATE] "Taste of Life: Volume 1" is OFFICIALLY LIVE! Thank you to this community!

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Hi everyone!

A while back, we posted a call for submissions in this subreddit for an upcoming short story anthology titled Taste of Life: Volume 1.

We wanted to pop back in and share a massive THANK YOU to everyone here who submitted their work, shared feedback, and supported this project! Reading through all your incredible submissions was an absolute privilege.

Thanks to the amazing writers who contributed, the anthology is officially LIVE on Amazon and Kindle Unlimited!

This project was created to give talented indie and freelance writers a platform while bringing readers uplifting, relatable stories about everyday life. We couldn't have brought it to life without the talent found in this community.

Check out the published anthology here:

https://www.amazon.in/dp/B0HNCQD2BN

Thank you all once again for being such a welcoming and inspiring space for authors. If you check out the book, We’d love to hear your thoughts!


r/KeepWriting • • 19h ago

looking for writers, artists & people with unfinished drafts 🌷

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hi everyone! <3

i’m putting together a little writing residency in jaipur this diwali, and i’d love to find a few people who might want to be part of it.

the idea is simple: a few days away from the noise, spent in an old-world haveli that feels like time moves a little differently. a shared stay, good food, long conversations, and uninterrupted hours to finally sit with the thing you’ve been meaning to write.

whether it’s a novel you’ve been thinking about for years, a half-finished manuscript, poetry, essays, a creative project, or simply the desire to write more seriously, this is an invitation to give it some space.

november 10–14, 2026 | jaipur, india

i’m imagining a small group of people who love words, ideas, art, and the kind of conversations that stay with you long after they end. we’ll build a gentle but intentional writing rhythm, share work if we want to, exchange feedback, and make room for the beautiful, frustrating, occasionally ridiculous process of creating something.

this isn’t a writing course or a productivity bootcamp. it’s more about creating the conditions to do the work, and finding your people along the way.

if you’ve been craving a little creative reset, or know someone who has, i’d love for you to reach out.

expression of interest: https://forms.gle/RMxuQ3KujkMTaAVL7

come write your magnum opus!! ✍️🌷

and if you have any questions, feel free to comment or dm me!


r/KeepWriting • • 1d ago

[Discussion] Have you ever received feedback so overwhelming that it made you stop sharing your work?

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Once, long ago, I received a feedback that made me overwhelmed. It wasn't overly negative but it didn't feel like the other person (reader) liked it. I'm not really a fan of my own writing (idk the style changes with time and context 😭) but I think it's heavily influenced by what I read.

After that I felt discouraged and I didn't want to share my work ever again. Is this feeling kind of immature? To hide away from public feedback but still want it? Did it happen to someone else too :(


r/KeepWriting • • 1d ago

Two of us

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It was around 6 in the evening. The sky was still orange. After walking far from the city, I had to cover the mountains. I just felt like walking all of a sudden. The mountains were steep, but mostly plateau. The air was chilled. I see a strange flag in front of me. A small one, poking from the ground. The shape of the flag was a triangle. I looked around and there was no one. Complete silence. I looked closely towards the trees, as far as my vision can get me, to see if anyone is watching me. After thorough inspection, I decided to dig the flag. I took a sharp stone lying on the ground and started digging. After taking out some mud, I still looked around, to see if anyone’s watching me. It was total silence. All I could hear were the leaves moving by the wind. Then something felt strange once I dug till the base. There was this machine type object. A robot of some sort. It had round wheels. It looked heavy. I tried to hold it and pick it up, but it was way heavier than it looked. I moved my palm to the side of the object, and tried to feel if there were any buttons or anything like that. I felt a metal plate where there was an inscription. My curiosity grew. I wanted to know more about this object, whatever it was. I stood firmly on the ground, and with all the force I had, lifted the object from the ground and took it out. I was panting. I felt dizzy. I won’t lie but the object took my breath away. The evening sunlight rays hit on the object and made the object glow like gold. This flag that was attached to the object was a mix of red and blue, with some strange shaped things on it. I felt I had discovered some rare metal. All my thoughts just stopped. All I could hear was my heartbeat.  It was anything I have ever seen in my entire life. I wanted to know more about this thing that was lying in front of me. The metal plate which was all rusty and almost impossible to read. I took my handkerchief and tried to clean it. There were some inscriptions written on it. After some thorough cleaning, I could read some of it.  The message on the plate read, “Mars Rover. Property of the United States of America”. Wait. Rover ? . America ?. This sounded familiar. I was sure that I knew about this name. I was scanning through all my memories  about this name.  And then suddenly a wave of past memories hit me. I vividly remember when I was young, my grandmother used to tell me stories about her life. About how when she was little and lived on planet Earth. Her father was in some space agency called NASA, which built machines , and how on planet Earth the humans sent machines to other planets to study them. And there was a concept of country. It was nothing but a big piece of land. They lived on this land called "USA". I started to miss my grandmother. She would be so amazed by this thing that was lying in front of me. I guess machines too have memories. It’s a pretty dumb statement. But when I looked at this object, I kept looking. I felt it had done its job. Painstakingly what it was sent for. But somehow due to uncertain circumstances, it got damaged. This machine has stories to tell. At that moment, it was just me and that Rover, in the middle of trees. Just two of us.  


r/KeepWriting • • 22h ago

[OT] A Conversation With A Machine

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