r/creativewriting • u/ayvard_han_011 • 7h ago
Writing Sample I always thought I'd survive a zombie apocalypse like a badass. Turns out, I'm just really good at panicking.
CHAPTER ONE: So Much for Being a Hero
A LOUD BANG. Then another. Then a high, thin buzzing filled my head, like a TV left on in the next room of my skull. Everything else sounded far away, as if I were underwater.
For a moment, I couldn’t make sense of anything around me. My ears were ringing, my head felt like it was about to split open, and the world seemed to be moving in slow motion.
Then, slowly, through the buzzing, I heard them. A low groan. Then another. And another. Dozens of them, growing louder with every heartbeat. I turned my head towards the street. Holy hell… and there they are.
It’s been four days since the world started screaming the word zombie. Four days since everything went to hell. One moment, life was normal. The next, chaos erupted in the blink of an eye. People screaming, cars crashing, strangers running for their lives… and those things tearing through anyone unlucky enough to cross their path. And here I was, caught right in the middle of it, fighting for my life.
You know, I really thought I’d rock a zombie apocalypse. Like, seriously. I’d always imagined myself being that badass protagonist who walks through a horde of zombies without breaking a sweat. Maybe I’d save a few people along the way, find a group of survivors, and eventually become the guy everyone relied on. Yeah. Right.
“Damn, man…” Not gonna lie, I was reconsidering my entire life plan. Watching those things tear people apart, ripping into their flesh and eating them alive, was enough to make me shit my pants. Just blood, screaming, and those disgusting bastards chewing on actual human beings.
I watched a man struggle beneath them, my feet refusing to move even though every instinct in my body was screaming at me to run. Then he looked up. Our eyes met. He didn’t scream. He just stared at me, his face twisted in pain, and mouthed two words.
Save me.
“Don’t try to act like a hero, you dumbass! He is already bitten. You can’t save him! YOU CAN’T SAVE HIM!” Then, behind him, something moved.
“FUCKKKK!” The ones that had just turned were already on their feet, heads snapping towards me. Then they came. “RUN, DENNIS! RUN!”
I talk to myself when I’m scared. Always have. Out loud, sometimes, which is a terrible habit when something is hunting you. Usually, I make jokes. Stupid jokes. The kind that make absolutely no one laugh except me. But right now, I had nothing. Either way, I forced myself to look away and ran. One step. Then another. I have to survive.
“Okay. Okay. Think, Dennis. THINK!” My eyes darted towards the buildings lining the street. I could try to get inside one of them, but that was a gamble I wasn’t willing to take. What if the doors were locked? What if I wasted precious seconds fumbling with a handle while those things caught up to me? And even if I got inside, how could I be sure there weren’t already zombies waiting for me in the dark? Nope. Absolutely not. Running was my best option.
Who knew all those daily runs in the park just to catch a glimpse of my crush, Vanessa, would finally pay off? All those mornings of dragging myself out of bed, sweating like a pig, and wondering why the hell I was doing this to myself… Turns out, I was training for the apocalypse. “Hah! Take that, lazy Dennis!” I almost felt proud of myself. Then I remembered the circumstances. “Ahhh, my beautiful Vanessa…” It’s all because of you, my love. Just wait! I’ll come and find youuu!
For a moment, I was already imagining our emotional reunion. Me, covered in dirt and blood, standing heroically before her while the wind blew through my hair… I smacked myself across the face with both hands while running. “BRO! NOW IS NOT THE TIME TO THINK ABOUT HER! SAVE YOURSELF FIRST!” Focus, Dennis. Focus. I needed somewhere I could get in and out of without trapping myself. A building with two possible exits would be ideal. If something went wrong, I’d have another way out.
I scanned the street as I ran until I reached an intersection. To my right, a pileup of crashed cars and abandoned vehicles blocked the road. There was barely enough room to squeeze through, and beyond the wreckage, I could see more cars tangled together. A dead end. “Great. Fantastic. Love the options.” I turned towards the left. Several zombies were lying motionless along the roadside. At least, they had been motionless. The noise from the horde chasing me had caught their attention. One by one, their heads began to turn. Then their bodies started to move, as if someone had just switched them back on. “Oh, you’ve got to be kidding me.” The left road was becoming a nightmare. I looked around again, desperately searching for another option.
And there it was. A fire escape zigzagging up the side of an apartment building. “Ahhh! GOTCHA!” Of course, there was one tiny problem. To reach the fire escape, I had to sprint towards the very road where those newly awakened zombies were beginning to crawl and stagger to their feet.
“Ufff… decisions, decisions.” I glanced behind me. The horde was getting closer. I looked ahead. More zombies were waking up. I looked to my right. A beautiful collection of crashed cars blocking the road. “JUST PICK A DAMN ROAD, MAN!” And so, I did.
I sprinted towards the fire escape, running straight into the direction of the approaching zombies. I dodged a body sprawled across the road, and nearly slipped on something I really didn’t want to identify. My lungs burned. My legs screamed. Every step felt like it might be my last. But I made it.
The bottom of the fire escape was a counterweighted drop-down ladder, the kind you see on old Boston apartment buildings. It was raised, hanging well above my reach. I jumped, caught the lowest rung, and my weight dragged it down with a screech that echoed along the whole street. I scrambled up the rungs, and they were right behind me. They almost caught up to me. God.
The moment I reached the first landing, I hauled the ladder back up behind me, out of reach, so they couldn’t climb. Then I grabbed the railing and practically launched myself up the metal stairs. One floor. Two floors. Three floors. Finally, I reached a landing and leaned against the wall, gasping for air.
“Hah… hah… holy shit.” I peeked over the railing. The zombies were still down there, wandering around like a bunch of unpaid extras who’d forgotten their lines. Some were stumbling against the walls, while others seemed more interested in the bodies lying along the road. I grinned. “That’s right, you ugly bastards! Come get me now!” I even laughed. “Hahahaha! Who’s the badass now?”
And then—
A hand shot out of the window beside me.
“AAAAAAAHHHH!” I nearly jumped out of my skin. I stumbled backwards, clutching my chest as if my heart had just tried to escape through my throat. “WHAT THE HELL, MAN?!” The hand slapped against the glass again. I stared at it for a moment. Then I slowly looked around. “Oh.” There was a zombie inside the apartment. Right beside me.
“Cool. Cool, cool, cool.” I swallowed. “New plan. I’m setting up camp on the roof.” Because apparently, surviving the apocalypse wasn’t enough. I also had to deal with jump scares.
The rooftop seemed like the perfect place to spend the night. It was high enough to keep me away from the zombies on the street, and I could keep an eye on my surroundings. I could rest, figure out what the hell was happening, and plan my next move in the morning.
The rooftop door was locked. I tried the handle. Nothing. I pushed against it with my shoulder. Still nothing. I stared at the door. The door stared back. “Seriously? SERIOUSLY?” I kicked it once, more out of frustration than any real hope of opening it. “Fine! Keep your stupid door!”
I stepped back and looked over the edge of the building. The neighbouring building wasn’t impossibly far away, but it was far enough to turn a bad jump into a very short life. And down below? Zombies. Lots of them. I imagined myself attempting the jump, missing the ledge, and becoming the main course at an undead buffet. “Yeah, no. I’m not that desperate.” Not yet, anyway.
So that left me with one option. The stairs. I could stay on the landing for a while, but eventually, I’d need food and water. And judging by the way my stomach was already complaining, eventually was going to come sooner rather than later.
I settled into a corner where I could keep an eye on the ladder and the street below. It wasn’t exactly a five-star hotel, but at least the zombies couldn’t reach me easily. For now, that was good enough.
A day passed. And let me tell you something. Hunger is a different kind of monster. At first, I tried to ignore it. I sat in a corner, watched the streets below, and convinced myself that I could last a little longer.
Then my stomach growled. I ignored it. It growled again. I glared at it. “Listen, buddy. We’re in the middle of a zombie apocalypse. Read the room.” My stomach did not care.
Eventually, I couldn’t take it anymore. I had to find food. Carefully, I made my way down one floor and stopped beside an apartment window. Through the glass, I could see a kitchen.
And lying on the floor—
Ramen packets.
Beautiful, glorious ramen packets. I stared at them as though I’d discovered buried treasure. “Jackpot.” I almost wanted to cry. Instant noodles. The food of champions. The one thing that could make even the worst day a little better.
I pressed my face closer to the window and scanned the apartment. Nothing moved. I waited. Still nothing. I watched for another minute, checking the corners and the spaces between the furniture. I wasn’t about to walk into a room without making sure it was safe. Finally, I reached for the window. Slowly, carefully, I began to ease it open.
And just as I was about to climb inside—
An old man shuffled past the kitchen doorway. I froze. His skin was pale, his movements stiff, and his head hung at an unnatural angle.
A zombie.
He disappeared into the next room without even looking in my direction. I pulled my hand away from the window. Every muscle in my body had locked up. For a few seconds, I didn’t even breathe. Then I slowly backed away. “Okay…” I swallowed. “Okay, Dennis. We are going to be a little more careful from now on.” I continued down another floor. Maybe the next apartment would be safer.
Some of the merged paragraphs are on the long side. If you'd rather have them shorter for phone reading, I can split the longest ones (the chase section, for example) at natural breaks. I can also write a hook title for the post.
