Telll me about my mix down

How do I make this sound more “pop”?

I'm at the stage musically where I am trying to push forward with any creative ideas and perservering all the way to the end so I have some kind of finalized version. I've had a bad habit in my creative process where I start something, keep recording variations of the beginning stages and never end up completing it. And then as more inspiration comes I just change to another project.

So today I came up with this song while driving and tried to ensure I don't just obsess over one part and just try and make it to the end.

Let me know your thoughts on how it sounds. I'd love any feedback at all because it's going to help me improve my craft.

Here is the song: https://youtu.be/-z5tycC0XIE

Holaaaaa!! I'm sharing a song from my EP The EP has a much more indie sound, with influences like Mac DeMarco, Gus Dapperton, and others. I chose this particular song because I feel like it represents the overall sound of the EP pretty well.

Id really appreciate some specific feedback on the song For example, Id love to know what you think about the vocal melodies, the instrumental arrangement, the mixing, or the production in general. Is there anything that sounds off, anything that feels out of place, or anything you think could work better? I'm also curious to know if you think the different elements work well together.

And of course, if something just doesn't work for you or you don't like the song, that's totally fine too JASDJASJ I'd rather hear your honest thoughts than just get compliments, since I'm trying to learn and notice things I might have missed myself.

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen!! Also, sorry if my English sounds a little weird, it's not my native language AJSDJAS

Greetings from Argentina!!

Please tell me what I can improve by also checking my other stuff on my yt!
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/@FelleccoMusic

Uploaded my debut project earlier this year and wasn't the best at promoting it - folk / acoustic-electronic / psychedelic vibe. Feel free to check out my other music links as well, hope you enjoy:

https://open.spotify.com/artist/3n1Sbo8rhRTmLYJAKdxI6x?si=7YO2aJv6SZSuOZrc4ypXaA&nd=1&dlsi=29b9f3cdc0d649c2

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JtVBFTIU5GY

https://beacons.ai/d3frank?fbclid=PAZXh0bgNhZW0CMTEAAadiQrE1rSQBAlifxrjvRBnJ0iW6R7Cm56jvA675n2jTIijGlDll1hqcrmYT6g_aem_1PjGFwG93BoY88Ss4QKuvg

Seeking Feedback:Mix

Hey everyone,I’ve been working on a brand new original techno track called "Freedom" and just wanted to share it here. Let me know what you think of the vibe, the groove, or anything else that stands out. Appreciate you taking the time to listen! 🙏

What makes ambient music good for focus without becoming boring?

I've been exploring ambient electronic and downtempo music lately, and one thing I'm trying to understand is how much progression people actually want in background music.

Do you prefer:

• Slowly evolving synth pads with almost no melody?
• A subtle repeating melodic motif?
• Downtempo beats with a steady rhythm?
• A mix that gradually changes over 20–60 minutes?

I'm especially interested in what you find distracting when you're trying to work.

Curious to hear what everyone prefers. https://youtu.be/FHdOGnpi4MA?si=YM9WdqqdC9A40hNT

Hello! I am trying to create a soundtrack for the OST of an upcoming VR game. This is what I have of it so far but I cannot think of what to add to it next. Please critique what I have and suggest what I could add. Thank you!

No Second Sky – new official progressive rock music video by Acoustic Fire

I’ve just released a newly edited version of the official music video for “No Second Sky”, an original progressive rock song by Acoustic Fire.

The audio has not been remastered; this version features improved visuals and a new cinematic edit.

I’d really appreciate feedback on the music, arrangement, vocal mix and video editing.

What works best for you, and what could be improved?

YouTube:

https://youtu.be/hv0_HXP7mvE

My latest track. I'd like some feedback about the general mix and the architecture of the song. Thx in advance