I got some feedback that the logo was too complex, too many lines

What do you think of this?

Generic bird. For any of you knowledgeable about birds, what type of bird would you guess this to be?

Here, there is a way of building mass out of what is not quite figure: on the one hand, the shadows, like muddy windshield-wiper traces that slide beneath the characters in an almost autonomous manner, or that cut through bodies without any identifiable light source; on the other hand, these masses of hair like wigs made of paint, which serve as protective headgear for the protagonists, or even as a motorcycle helmet for the man with the pipe.
Acrylic on paper
50.2 × 35 cm

made with roblox and photopea of all things🙏

Black pencil and pastel chalk. Now.